How do you begin to edit
the 'Organic Documentary"?
First step is viewing your
footage, taking notes and
logging your footage
I have covered this in a
previous article, posted at
our Free DVhandbook at
DVworkshops.com.
How do you approach the
edit? First let me give
you a hint of what NOT to
do. Many students love
to take all their interview
bites and group them into
themes on the time line. For
example... A documentary
about a Jazz musician....all
the sound bites about his
early years are grouped
together...then all the
interview parts about his
childhood are grouped
together...by "grouped"
together I mean edited into
a "mini sequences" on the
time-line.
Logically, this process
makes sense..but in reality
you end up being more
concerned with set-ups and
transitions between these
pre-built themes...instead
of unfolding a story for the
viewer. Logic does not
always lead to
entertainment.
Over and over again I see
linear, planning types of
students try and
super-organize prior to
their edit..creating
elaborate rows of 3X7
Cards...forcing them into a
3 act structure.....the
result is usually dismay at
why it doesn't work, .then
they call in a script doctor
to fix it...and 9 times out
of then, this involves a
more organic approach to
mixing the footage together
to create an interesting
experience for the viewer.
I suggest starting your
editing process by creating
the Opening for your
Documentary....from the
first Credits with your
opening...and build from
there. There are many
types of Openings, all of
which we demonstrate in our
workshops; The Cold Open,
The Sound ups, The Slow
Reveal,The written Quote
Open and finally the Visual
Montage Open- Or "Dirty
River " opening as I
like to call it...because
you can take a helicopter
shot of a dirty river, throw
some music and credits over
it..and you have an opening.
Once you build your open,
start building the big
picture of your story. This
could be an establishing
shot of a Neighborhood with
text, or as in
Genghis Blues, a slow
reveal of your character, in
that case Adrian opens
Genghis Blues with a close-
up of a cane on the
pavement...then slowly
reveal s that this person is
a Blind Musician. Enron- The
Smartest guys in the room"
is a great documentary to
see how they built the story
question into the open with
Sound ups. The story
question is really "Why
should the viewer watch
this...why is this going to
be fascinating and
interesting? Academy
award nominated director
Adrian Belic ( Genghis Blues
2000) covers the story
question in his 1 hour
Advanced Documentary DVD on
sale at
DVworkshops.com.
My first minute is always
building the big picture for
the viewer...introducing
them to the basic characters
and locations of the
documentary...This does
not have to be "in your
face", it can be a slow
paced reveal...you choose
the style, feel and mood..JUST
don't Assume the viewer
knows the basic fundamentals
of your story...Lay it
out for them ....then start
digging into the real stuff
that reveals the truth of
the situation. Remember the
VIEWER does not know as much
about the character as you.
Use Text or narration to
assist your story telling...I
like to use both. Shot by
shot, scene by scene, lay
out your story, one cut at a
time....Use the five
elements of
documentary....don't rely on
Interviews.. as much as
possible use image and sound
to tell the story....these
go directly to the "Old
Brain" and effect the
viewer on a deeper level of
experience...words, (as used
in interviews) are processed
by a newer part of our
brain...and are less
emotionally involving.
That's why you do not
want to group all interviews
together as your first
start...you end up with a
WORD Driven FILM instead of
a IMAGE & Sound based film
that is an EXPERIENCE
and not a bunch of boring
talking heads that puts
everyone to sleep.
Let me be clear, I am not
against the interview..I use
them all the time...It's
just that I try to take
the viewer on a ride and a
experience that is filled
with many types of stimuli..not
just a series of linear
edited talking heads that
make logical sense but don't
move or entertain the
viewer. Remember to make
it like an EXPERIENCE and
not like a TERM PAPER...
Build your documentary from
the start....mixing all the
elements up. More info on
how to create Dynamic
Interview "Scenes" Click
here to read past
DVworkshops Article on "Creating
the Dynamic Documentary".
An important note about
the actual experience and
work flow of editing. Once
you begin to lay the edit on
the time-line....do not be
concerned with exactness or
polishing ..I do not
mean leave the edits long or
big spaces..I mean if you
use a shot of an
airplane....and you know
there is a a better one ,
but can't find it at that
moment...leave the existing
shot there, and move on with
your STORY TELLING...don't
get caught up with
perfection on the first
version of your edit...just
try and lay the story down
as best as you can.
The Pinball Effect...this
can only take place when you
have your first rough edit
on the Time-Line. What is
the Pinball Effect? This is
the effect of watching the
edit and it triggers your
mind to evaluate and
rearrange the it as you
watch it...As you view
the edit, be honest with
your self if something is
boring...or the best stuff
is 2/3 into the edit....that
should trigger the Pinball
Effect...your mind tells you
to move the best stuff from
the middle to the begriming
to grab folks
attention...then after you
place it there...you get
another idea of what might
go well next to it....and so
on and so on.....the
Pinball effect can only
happen with a Video and
Audio Edit... a bunch of 3 X
7 Cards on the wall are not
effective in triggering the
Pinball Effect....Except
they give you a great false
illusion of control..and
make you look like a really
smart, organized filmmaker
when someone walks into your
edit bay......but paper
edits are different then
real edits on a time line.
In Summary
- Build your
Documentary from the
start of the time- line
(the opening to your
film)
- Create an Open
(Sound Up-Montage-Cold
Open- Slow Reveal-
Written Quote"
- Use the first minute
to build the big picture
of your character and
location
- Establish your Story
Question
- Build your film as
an experience, not as a
Term Paper
- Logic does not
always equal
Entertainment
-
Use the Five Elements of
Documentary- NOT
just INTERVIEWS
- Get your rough edit
done, perfection is not
needed on this first
edit
- The Pinball Effect
- The first edits will
"Tell you how to re-edit
them"